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fontech ([personal profile] fontech) wrote2019-03-19 12:00 am
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Concrit

This is where people can post constructive criticism for my roleplaying.

Am I not IC? Don't like something I've done? Think I handled a plot badly? Am I attention whoring? Let me know here.

Please keep in mind that I reserve the right to ignore any critique posted here if it's incoherent or just plain trolling. If I'm doing it wrong, don't do it wrong while telling me off for it.

Currently this is for the following characters:

[livejournal.com profile] luceti:

Asch the Bloody | Tales of the Abyss | [livejournal.com profile] mirrorbirth
Edward Elric | Fullmetal Alchemist | [livejournal.com profile] truthget
Mikage | 07-Ghost | [livejournal.com profile] notakor
Suki | Avatar: The Last Airbender | [livejournal.com profile] sokkafangirl
Zack Fair | Final Fantasy VII | [livejournal.com profile] wingenvy


[identity profile] jpegasus.livejournal.com 2009-06-19 08:31 pm (UTC)(link)
Hello! This is not concrit in any form, but --

I found you via old tota fic recs, and have been poking through your rp logs (most noteably edward's) and I just want to tell you that I think you are fabulous. Your voice(s) are great ♥!
vermified: (<3)

[personal profile] vermified 2009-06-19 09:30 pm (UTC)(link)
*was randomly yet conveniently logged in as Edward*

Thank you! ♥ It's always a pleasant surprise to come upon a fellow IU fan ^^

[identity profile] slashing-canon.livejournal.com 2009-06-19 09:46 pm (UTC)(link)
[s-speaking of being conveniently logged in |B]

It's true ;; it seems rare enough to find people who even know what it is.
vermified: (vermy - stumbling in)

[personal profile] vermified 2009-06-19 09:47 pm (UTC)(link)
Seriously ;-; IU needs infinite love.

[identity profile] slashing-canon.livejournal.com 2009-06-19 09:52 pm (UTC)(link)
Maaan I'm impressed you managed to find fan art at all, for your icons. I am appropriately wowed \o\

[identity profile] faizedout.livejournal.com 2009-06-20 07:16 am (UTC)(link)
That's because I'm an art whore and have Oracle Room open constantly.
vermified: (heh heh)

[personal profile] vermified 2009-06-20 07:20 am (UTC)(link)
Of course, dear. :|

[identity profile] faizedout.livejournal.com 2009-06-20 07:22 am (UTC)(link)
I know it's usually searching in vain but I still want my pretties. D|

[identity profile] nice2seeyousir.livejournal.com 2010-10-15 09:04 pm (UTC)(link)
YOU DON'T LET ME ANONYMOUS. SO YOU GET THIS ACCOUNT. who am IIIII

I has no crit. Just a question.

WHY HAVEN'T YOU ICON'D THIS GLORIOUS FACE? (http://i52.tinypic.com/m74ygh.png)

That is all.
dissonates: <lj site="livejournal.com" user="kannin"> ([echoes] .....um.)

[personal profile] dissonates 2010-10-15 09:22 pm (UTC)(link)
....fffff. Anonymous is disabled now, really? I enabled it forever ago wtf.

BECAUSE THAT IMAGE HAUNTS MY NIGHTMARES, WHY WOULD YOU DO THAT ;____;

[identity profile] nice2seeyousir.livejournal.com 2010-10-15 09:29 pm (UTC)(link)
BUTBUTBUT

IT IS THE GREATEST IMAGE ):

...

How about dis? (http://i56.tinypic.com/6sanbn.png)
dissonates: <lj site="livejournal.com" user="kannin"> (a little frazzled arent we)

[personal profile] dissonates 2010-10-15 09:36 pm (UTC)(link)
......WHAT IS THAT

[identity profile] nice2seeyousir.livejournal.com 2010-10-15 09:37 pm (UTC)(link)
It is Asch's srs face.

It is the face he makes everyday. Clearly.
dissonates: <lj site="livejournal.com" user="kannin"> (best asch icon ever.)

[personal profile] dissonates 2010-10-15 10:11 pm (UTC)(link)
/traumatized forever

[identity profile] nice2seeyousir.livejournal.com 2010-10-15 10:13 pm (UTC)(link)
But wait, I saved the best for last (http://i53.tinypic.com/209pumo.png).

AND A GOOD DAY TO YOU.
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[personal profile] markofthewise 2012-01-07 09:09 pm (UTC)(link)
First off, this is something I actually want to talk to you directly about. But I just wanted to be able to deliver my thoughts first, coherently, beforehand, just so it's all out there. Especially since I realize it can come off sounding petty and whiny, so I want to be able to say it the right away.

Right now we're playing in two different casts. We have Sokka and Suki, Ling and Ed. The first pair are lovers living together, the second are just friends. For anyone that knows our characters, it's pretty obvious that Sokka is my forerunner for characters, just like Ed is for you. We both have the characters we enjoy the most and usually will play more often than the others. Balancing them with the others isn't always easy. While I can't speak for your other casts, it feels like Suki is losing out when it comes to this balance. Not just in terms of activity, but also interest. I'm often disappointed to see that you're not that interested in doing things with Suki on her own or even within her cast. For me, it oftens puts me in a tight spot. Sokka is in Luceti and engaged, but how often is he seen with Suki? How often is Suki even seen? Most of his friends only know Suki by reputation and maybe a few meetings here and there. When Sokka goes to parties or other activities, his other half is strangely absent. Of course, it would be hard to keep up with someone as active as Sokka, but even things as simple as group thread for housemates will often have her absent. While this wouldn't matter as much for Suki being just any other character, it makes it difficult for me to play Sokka without her. She's his most important CR in Luceti, after all.

It's not really slow tags from her that bother me. I'm actually fine with threads moving slowly. It's the apparent lack of interest in her that's constantly disheartening. If our castmates are talking about doing something with the group or want to get up to shenanigans, most of the time I have to go find you and tell you about it, insisting you join in on it. I don't feel like I can plot to do things with Suki because it seems less that we're both eager to do something and more like I'm dragging you into something you're doing out of obligation. That's not really a fun way to tag someone at all. It helps to know that the person I'm threading with is enjoying it as much as I am. But I just don't feel that when it comes to Suki. And really, Sokka isn't the only affected by that disparity. On a more OOC level, I'll often find myself wishing that I could get half out of Suki what Ling is able to get out of Ed. Now, I really enjoy playing Ling and I don't intend to drop him again. But that Suki vs. Ed balance can kill my desire to play him some days. Which is a shame, because I really love our FMA cast.

I'm not telling you to drop Suki. If I could convince you to put bring her out more and actually enjoy playing with her and doing things with her, I'd love that. But if you're not feeling that with her, then I don't want you to play her just because she's in a ship with Sokka or because you don't want to let me down. It won't destroy him and I'll make him deal with it. I like having CR with you and I enjoy threading with you. I just want that to go both ways. And if it's not that way with Suki, then maybe it's time to consider letting her go.

Anyway, those are my thoughts. We can talk on it more, but I wanted to get out in the open first.